you like making new anime friends i go here each Sunday we got some people who like anime video games and comics maybe you can join us Sunday we just relax and later on talk or hang out here the site if you want more info about it 2657 S. Lawndale Ave Chicago, Illinois 60623 it start at 9:30 am and it on a school there a poster board outside too

I am looking for novices and experts of art alike for this upcoming project me and my group will be working on if you are interested please email me: onlythebestcinema@gmail.com

Well, since Noone else offered any advice, I will lend mine. I love to read and write myself (although I don't have too much time for it now). I like it alot. It's got a good flow to it and some cool imagery and allegorical stuff. With that being said, there is room for improvement. There are times when the allegory switches back and forth between the play and real life that kind of distracts a little from the flow of it. That is the main issue I had with it. As long as you keep posting I will try to give some form of thoughts on it.

Haha voli XD