Hello, welcome to MO. Introverts, unite.

Amma say. I dont mind much the usual loli,teen senario of dating someone older as long as they truly love each others. But there is actually some of thoses awful pedophile who are just ew and it feels truly awful and I just skip. Love is love, but some are just way overboard

"How May I Improve" was supposed to be the title. Haha! Woops... I blame my phone for auto type! From one's own perspective it can be difficult to see what areas need correction or improvement. In this thread I ask those that interact with myself to list any concerns or weakness in character that I could address. Even from a limited view there may still be importance to how I am perceived or shown in an unfavorable light. All critiques are welcome and if one fears my feelings just know that I hold Aleph's blunt remarks in a positive light. If that's any indicator of my tolerance toward ball busting. Thank you in advance and happy critiquing!

https://www.greedygourmet.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/05/matzo-the-daily-meal-735x477.jpg Just be careful to not break

Whichever one can fix my damn hip, nets me a cutie gf, and doesn't come with the catch of being some hellish dystopia that I will most likely be vaporized in within the hour Actually hold up FMA could do like all of that (vaporized within the hour bit might be debatable after the end of the series lmao), I mean even if Xing Alkahestry couldn't fix it someone like Winry could just give me some sick automail instead, right?

might have better luck with a gofundme page, because they are not going to do anything about a petition. They need money, and lots of it.

-Project F8- (Intro) Figure out how to shift focus back to characters living in island harbor. Started digressing on other characters from different continent. Began with a solid introduction using weather to reflect tone while foreshadowing developments. Very classic writing trope. Maybe too on the nose? Fits the source material. Probably keep that theme throughout. *Have a large sized monster corpse block road. Delivery drivers have to deal with situation as storm moves in. Radio for back up?* ------------------------------ Name for character: •Vesper = Evening star or the planet Venus. (Use as the name of a daughter) •Leona (daughter) •Seren = alternative to star (d) •Sephora = Bird (d)