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Lunar Lone Wolf @kameiya
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Lunar Lone Wolf @kameiya
You said hard core man. *pokes halo*
Dare.
BurningHalo @burninghalo
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BurningHalo @burninghalo
Kame I dare you to make your next 5 posts on here haikus
Dat Boi [FALLEN] @yoyoitsnsfw
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Dat Boi [FALLEN] @yoyoitsnsfw
Truth
also someone give me feedback on the song ;-;
Lunar Lone Wolf @kameiya
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Lunar Lone Wolf @kameiya
What's a haiku?
The song wouldn't load for me dat
MidastheAlchemist @jtibbs
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MidastheAlchemist @jtibbs
Haikus are poems that use a 575 syllable format.
This is a Haiku
There are many like it here.
But this is all mine.
^ lousy attempt but follows the rules.
@Dat, I don't feel like you used enough of the song, it felt very repetitive but the original is already pretty metal so I don't know what to suggest.
Truth please.
Dat Boi [FALLEN] @yoyoitsnsfw
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Dat Boi [FALLEN] @yoyoitsnsfw
Stupidest thing I've ever done is not eaten for 2 days because I didn't feel very hungry, then went to the bathroom and passed out and whacked my head on the cabinet on the way down.
Lunar Lone Wolf @kameiya
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Lunar Lone Wolf @kameiya
...a what??? I can do amateur poems.
Oh
4 worded
5 worded
4 worded
BurningHalo @burninghalo
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BurningHalo @burninghalo
Haikus are essentially poems. "Traditional haiku consist of 17 on(Syllables), in three phrases of five, seven and five on respectively." for example:
Crows caw at midnight
The cat sours the basil
Toons were my childhood
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BurningHalo @burninghalo
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BurningHalo @burninghalo
Syllables, not necessarily words
MidastheAlchemist @jtibbs
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MidastheAlchemist @jtibbs
No Kameiya its not the words its the Syllables.
Count the Syllables per word. The first line has to be 5, the second is 7, and the last is 5 again. Number of words don't matter.
Syllable is three.
-1--2--3-4----5
Count them with me now okay?
--1-------2----3----4---5----6--7
Here is five again.
-1---2---3---4--5
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