godspell

does this sound too weird? A passing conversation piqued your ears, causing your steady pace to suddenly lag when a crackling lightning bolt of consternation struck your body.

ok last time and ill stop spaming you xD         The cubes of ice, which once languidly drifted inside of the murky black abyss that was contained in glass, now rested peacefully at the bottom when you decided to head back home. As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly. Now hovering above the horizon, the blaze reined unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied it, simmering the city beneath it uncomfortably. Combined with the fervor that radiated from the bodies that drifted around you, your skin became adored by protective beads of perspiration in an attempt to cool your torrid flesh. 

better?         The cubes of ice, which once languidly drifted inside of the murky black abyss that was contained in glass, rested peacefully at the bottom when you decided to head back home. As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly. Now hovering above the horizon, the blaze reined unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied it, simmering the city beneath it uncomfortably. Combined with the fervor that radiated from the bodies around that drifted around you, your skin became adored by protective beads of perspiration in an attempt to cool your growingly torrid flesh. 

how does this sound         The cubes of ice that once languidly drifted inside of the murky black abyss that was contained in glass finally rested at the bottom once you decided to head back home. As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly. Now hovering above the horizon, the blaze reined unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied it, simmering the city beneath it uncomfortably. Combined with the fervor that radiated from the bodies around that drifted around you, your skin became adored by protective beads of perspiration in an attempt to cool your growingly torrid flesh. 

As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly. Now hovering above the horizon, the blaze reined unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied it, simmering the city beneath it uncomfortably OK THIS IS BETTER RIGHT?

As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly. Now hovering above the horizon, unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied it, simmering the city beneath it uncomfortably. OKWHATABOUTHISISTHISBETTER?!

ok whataboutthis i changed it abnit As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly, now hovering above the horizon, unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied it, simmering the city beneath it uncomfortably. is that better or worse?

As the afternoon morphed into the early evening, the sun shifted accordingly, hovering above the horizon as it simmered unabated by the thin, wispy clouds that accompanied. does this work? does simmer work here? I'm trying to find a single word verb to describe something radiating heat.

suiko is a cute but i prefered there relationship and suiryuu in the webcomic https://i.imgur.com/tPGfTMm.png