Tips needed (mainly guys needed)

its creative writing cuz idc about ur expiriences, this is for my '~*/Anime\*~' :D and im sorry men, I thought ud all be shallow and be put off but ur really understanding about this :D (I need to hang with a new crowd....) next issue at hand? that I don't get sued for copy write by the K-On people!

If it's a good start and keeps my attention then whatever, unless it just turns into pointless touchy-feely nonsense with no story drive behind it. What is the mood of your writing anyway? Like is it more of a lighthearted or darker realism?

@Anjukuran - Agreed. As for kids on the slope, I caught a few episodes of that at Otakon this year... I have to say I loved what I saw; story/writing was good, and the music was fantastic. But I guess you have to enjoy real music like Jazz. Now to find the rest of the series to finish it.