MO fan member arting and stories

What do you think so far? Should I change her outfit, design, hairstyle and emotion? How about circular room setting, I think I need make the room look way bigger. Based on Kameiya's story "The two walked into the circular room and stopped dead. In the middle of the floor Mikan stood with an orb of swirling blue and black fog with the collapsed body of midas by her feet, but what caught their attention the most was his soul floating over his unconscious body with a string of his soul still attached to his body" pg13.

thnx! still in a very rough stage. It's really late now, I may change things based on what Kameiya may say tomorrow :) Artstyle might not be fitting for her story tone though *sweats*

I LOVE IT!!!! https://i.pinimg.com/originals/02/db/20/02db20cf6e526731f7108f4e3b60b44e.gif

I did not imagine the horns, but no doubt everyone here can agree you are super awesome lynes. It's amazing to see what I write be brought in pic view.

O.o I assumed that they were horns. Lyness? ??? Also, I might sound selfish but cuz I suck at drawing I wanted to see if you're willing to take a request that involves midas and what will happen? A particular scene. I think it might turn out cool or totally creepy.

It was a cat ear on her, and I thought Mikan would like that. Sure Kameiya, I can try to draw anything you want me to regarding Midas. "ANYTHING" https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/theamazingworldofgumball/images/d/d4/Tumblr_mh2gc9qTru1qmo3obo1_r1_400.gif