Only Dreaming

£dgar.F @anixrin started Only Dreaming

Aug 09, 12 at 10:28pm

It Seems That life Only Brings Me pain So I Close My Eyes and Dream of you As i lay next to you I think of us as one and two Near But always apart... Everyday I pray to God I'm Not Prefect i Know that clearly But Bring me The Woman I dream of Night And Day Only The Woman of My Dreams will bring joy to my life But When i awake She's Never there... Dreaming of a woman that Never was Dreaming of a Love that Never will Be Only Dreaming... Only Dreaming...

ロイ @wallace614 commented on Only Dreaming

ロイ @wallace614

Aug 10, 12 at 12:49am

Its really good but kind of sad too man but keep up the good writing

Kyetge! @kyetge commented on Only Dreaming

Kyetge! @kyetge

Aug 10, 12 at 3:37am

If you turn that into a song and post it on Youtube, ALL THE CHICKS WILL DIG YOU (except the ones already wooed by other songs).

£dgar.F @anixrin commented on Only Dreaming

£dgar.F @anixrin

Aug 12, 12 at 12:41am

That you! Most of my writing is sad. lol I don't think i have a good voice to sing.. idk

Kyetge! @kyetge commented on Only Dreaming

Kyetge! @kyetge

Aug 12, 12 at 11:09am

Well then... have someone else sing it for you? Even if they get fame/attention for singing it, there are some people(like me) who appreciate epic songwriting. I know I'm not the only one. :P

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