XaumbyKitty

It was a good story i enjoyed it but there are 2 issues that i see one u relate to only ppl who got the blue version and not the red version where your character was called Red i for one chose to make my own name i probly would have made it more personal to myself then trying to make it personal for other people the second issue is the ending "I never did come out of that coma" then how did u write the story? lol i would have wrote the paper as if telling someone else's tale so it makes sense but thats just my opinion