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the empty bottle

moonlightreaper

moonlightreaper @moonlightreaper started the empty bottle

moonlightreaper @moonlightreaper

Sep 13, 12 at 12:41am

In a peaceful town The snow gently falls As he looks into his woman's eyes He tells her that shes his all The moon is full The night is long The next thing he knows its dawn As the bottle empties He puts the picture down At that moment he realizes All the thing he could have done The king has fallen It's all over All he had to do was say he loves her

momoichi

Lamby @momoichi commented on the empty bottle

Lamby @momoichi

Oct 14, 12 at 7:44pm

:P!!*claps* nice ^^!

moonlightreaper

moonlightreaper @moonlightreaper commented on the empty bottle

moonlightreaper @moonlightreaper

Oct 16, 12 at 10:17pm

thank you i write in my spare time

kawaiidango

Galactic-Squidd @kawaiidango commented on the empty bottle

Galactic-Squidd @kawaiidango

Oct 19, 12 at 2:44pm

*claps* lucky my wroting sucks all I can write about is depressing pain stuff but I wanna write about happy things QnQ

moonlightreaper

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moonlightreaper @moonlightreaper

Oct 28, 12 at 2:23am

it is sad that this is the only one people like

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