Poems are not my forte, so please excuse the shabby depressing Dr. Seuss like rhyme. (。・//ε//・。) I put all my heart and negativity into this one, critiques are welcome but please be kind!!! (#`ε´# )ゞ
I love your handwriting!! I also really love how you decided to frame the poem. I enjoy that the majority of the rhymes felt natural, it actually took me a moment to catch on to it even rhyming in the first place. I enjoy the inclusion of nature in explaining powerful emotions <3
@Nishmo my handwriting is super inconsistent, I'll take the compliment though! I rarely do poems because you can compress so much in between the lines but no one really gets it (also because I suck at them). I'm generally very conscious of making it too rhyme-y, so it matters a lot that you think its mostly natural!! (❁´ω`❁)
I put all my heart and negativity into this one, critiques are welcome but please be kind!!! (#`ε´# )ゞ