my art - do a critique pls?

last time i put photos of my art here i got some super positive comments and some really negative ones lol so im excited to hear about it this time (: http://girlygamerstuff.blogspot.com/2017/06/my-art-first-half-of-2017.html disclaimer- IM 16 YEARS OLD DONT GO YELLING AT ME BC IM NOT MUSEUM WORTHY OK THANKS lol // i dont even plan on going to art school or becoming an artist its literally just a hobby

I'm no artist but as someone who used to be an aspiring graphic designer, I really like how in depth the details are. The one that I don't feel too fond of personally is the last one. A suggestion I have for you is to do them on blank paper next time if you could instead of line paper. It would look a lot nicer and neater. Overall, the drawing of Jungkook and Chanyeol are the best out of the four. Keep it up.

Hi there! i'm an art student and comic artist! the first one is great, i could see it was Jungkook right away, but one thing you need the practice on is definitely mouths but as you said, you're not aspiring to be an artist so i'm not gonna go all harsh critic on you, but i would say to continue making things like the jungkook piece and practice on the mouths a bit :)