Create a scene
Max @reclaw
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Create a scene
Max @reclaw
Hello there.
In this thread the goal is to write about and describe many very immersive scenes. Let us journey together to whereever the writers send us.
Every post should be one scene. Write it well, write about it as if you were there yourself. Let the others feel the scene you are describing.
I will leave everything else to you. :)
Time for some adventuring.
Max @reclaw
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Max @reclaw
You and I are sitting on a bench. It's made of wood. Hard, yet comfortable. It has stood in this place for quite a while. You can feel the warm sun on your forehead - occasionally blocked by the leaves of a palm tree, dancing above us in the wind. There is a pleasant cool breeze coming from our left side. Seagulls can be heard in the distance. After fiddling around for a while in a cooler next to me, I offer you a beer. It feels awfully cold in your hand. Almost painful. You take a sip and put it beside yourself. The prickly cold runs down your throat and remains for a while - then fades. We stare at the bright red sunset above the sea - right in front of us. You push your feet into the sand before the bench. It tickles between your toes, yet it feels smooth and warm.
Panda-kun™ @hell_hound7
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Panda-kun™ @hell_hound7
its dead silent. the only source of sound comes from your frantic scrambling to fish your keys out of your pocket. you glance back to see if it was still following you, as you do that your keys go flying out of your pocket as you yank it out. it flies under the car. your heart which was pounding out of your chest suddenly sinks. as you hear a giggle behind you. "i found you" echoes from down the hall and you turn to see nothing there. at this point your panicking and you fly under your car struggling to get the keys that fell. and you hear footsteps drawing near while you barely get your fingers onto the key. the innocent laugh turns into a demonic roar "im right behind you" you grab the keys and get up trying to unlock the car. then you feel breathing on your neck and you freeze in your tracks. a sharp finger nail digs into your back as if it were poking you "tag your it"
. @richaadokun
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. @richaadokun
Clutch in, foot down. You twist the throttle and the beast screams, you're off. A surge of power kicks in, it dares you to go faster. The risks are on your mind but the rush takes over. You slam it up a gear, all you can hear is the engine and wind as you tuck. You feel a sense of freedom, you're flying. A turn approaches, you raise your body as you slam down the gears. The force is unreal, it's a wonder you're still on. You hear your knee scraping, apex is here, you're rolling on the throttle carefully knowing this is the only thing keeping the rear balanced. A sense of confidence occurs, you're one with the machine, you've tamed this beast. A second corner approaches, it's a blind corner but you've been down this road before. Knee down, looking through the corner. You see a car-
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