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Something I wrote :o

zenokun
Darkness descends, Chaos rises, Overall tyranny around. Abandoned homes, Bloodied streets, Naught but a sound. Pounding hearts, Fearful minds, Angels aren’t aware, Of just how black, And just how blue -- Their little world isn’t fair. Wholesome laughter, Cheerful glee, A tiny shred of bliss, Forewarning denied, Stripped away, Their parents’ final kiss. Kill their fathers, Rape their mothers, Orphaned -- left alone, With ceased laughter, Lingering thoughts, “For what sin have I to atone?” Sunken hearts, Aimless travels, A descent into a slippery slope, Heavy hearts, All alone, Not a scrap of hope. Darkness descends, Chaos rises, Overall tyranny around, Angels fall, Their fragile wings clipped, With naught but a sound.
lordelricsama
I feel as if I went to war... and lost everything. Other then that great work!
pocketto
Jul 15, 15 at 12:49pm
I enjoyed reading this one. Well done.
nintendo_werewolf
Nicely written, I write poetry myself, if you ever want to share, if you write more.
zenokun
Jul 16, 15 at 2:13am
Thanks, everyone! :o @Nintendo: I'd love to read some of your work. :)
nintendo_werewolf
Here's one of my poems Hello again mirror I see someone in your reflection but it ain't me blood drips from your corners to show your just as terrified as I am Cause their smiling at me and I don't know what their gonna do I don't know how long it's been since my last confession Sometimes my sanity slips, sometimes it gets bloody, sometimes I don't wanna talk about what happens when I slip. Hello again mirror You bitch looking like me It's been a thousand farewells an not a moment's forgiveness Since I've said this is who I am would you please be my friend I do my best to not carve myself apart but it's hard to swallow rejection when god's not answering Mirror, mirror on the wall before my face how's it going? there's someone in your reflection but it ain't me an I guess that's how it's gonna be cause I have no regrets for who I'm seeing
zenokun
Jul 17, 15 at 4:00am
What an aesthetically pleasant read!
stranger
Jul 17, 15 at 8:54am
beautiful pieces both of you! i feel that there is a certain pain conveyed.. is the "speaker" also the author? cause thats tough, strong emotions.. :0
nintendo_werewolf
Whose that last question to me or zenokun
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