Need Serious Feedback

https://soundcloud.com/akumetsu/drop-of-blood-theme-of-stray Ive been getting better at recording my favorite music genre: heavy metal (after 7+ years). I know this is more or less a dating site but there's not many headbangers believers in my locale (detroit MI ikr). Opinions and friends are hard to come by. So I thought I'd post this here and hopefully someone will tell me the good, bad, and ugs about my venture. P.S. most music is for my story and characters and is heavily inspired by a game called GUILTY GEAR and its music style but more or less simpler.