First story

He'd written a story years ago and he'd shared for the fourth time with someone on this website and it's a story he wrote in one hour and he didn't make any changes from then to a little after we spoke and message one another back and forth and that person being @leandra and she is quite nice and had some decent things to say about his story! His main issue according to her is potentially the grammar he'd used and that's fair, as he said he only wrote it and didn't look back for years, but he does plan to write a novel on a different note and that being a high fantasy novel which is not what he had written in this story he waffles about now!!