Help me with my story QAQ
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Lamby @momoichi
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Lamby @momoichi
have you read btoom? the protag female reminds me of that
i imagine he has an internal struggle over loving her for her and not for his old friend who passed away?
and maybe his protective feelings for her are because he couldnt protect his old friend?
also why does she remind him of his old friend? how did he/she die?
Lamby @momoichi
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Lamby @momoichi
it would be a fun idea to think of the different gangs and how they act
youd need to add a bosozoku gang and some other weird ass japanese gangs
maybe an all girl gang, they were popular in japan in like the 70s i think?
Lamby @momoichi
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Lamby @momoichi
what puts the protag above the other convicts? what is his strength? internal and external?
Panda-kun™ @hell_hound7
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Panda-kun™ @hell_hound7
@lamby nothing pretty much he isnt athletically capable, he isnt strong, he isnt over powered he is more normal. But he is a quick thinker, somewhat smart and has a fast reaction to things
Lamby @momoichi
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Lamby @momoichi
so good reflexes and quick witted
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