Wanting Feedback

I'm currently working on a story, that I eventually dream to turn into an anime. I made a small preview for it, and wanted some feedback. Pain. Loss. Suffering. Alone. Those are the words that rang through his head. He walked the timeless wasteland between his world and what lies beyond. He would go there, when he had nothing left to use for defence against the sorrow of his thoughts. It was a lonely place where few tread, but that is what he had wanted. “And now I start again.” he said, the agony strong in his voice. But another voice gave a calm warning from across the wasteland. “If you go down this path, you will be cursed, and you shall never find yourself. You will never be whole.” “What an empty warning,” he replied, “I walk this path... because I am cursed.” He stared into the portal in front of him. It would be his pain, his loss, his suffering, and he alone would carry a burden that the universe itself could not bear to carry. But he would carry that burden, just to find her. And he walked in, never looking back at the curse that followed him.