SAO-inspired poem
kirito_solo @kirito_solo
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SAO-inspired poem
kirito_solo @kirito_solo
Elsewhere-
Fallen castle dancing on my mind
Using endless nights as but a crutch
Years of strife and love to only find
My heart is built from ash and dust
Weak and thin my mind aches less
My soul bleeds and weeps for all the lost
How many passed without a last caress?
Slumber in the sinking endless frost
And yet I yearn for the fake pastels
The paint of nature pales to that forsaken land
Though each day had promise of a special hell
I ache for shards of time that slit my hand
Though now that I have the chance in life to roam
I realize it was there I made my home
Etherea Lock @etherealock
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SAO-inspired poem
Etherea Lock @etherealock
I really like this nicely done :)
Hopesedge @hopesedge
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SAO-inspired poem
Hopesedge @hopesedge
This is really quite good, especially that last line.
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