Advice plz

so i have been makign videos for not that long and i need some adivice on teh storyline cause i think my story line isnt that good adn i think all my friends are being nice to me and saying it is good i kno the animation suks but i am more focused on improving on my storyline b4 the animations so plz give me some adivce :) check out this video?http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RE1e3F10inw