please critique my art!

i made a post a while back with a different drawing and now i think ive honed my skills more ^^ please do not hold back on criticisms thank you! the drawing: http://girlygamerstuff.blogspot.com/2016/01/art-art-art-art-art-art-art.html (done with colored pencils)

Looks good! I would maybe add a little more texture to the hair, and use foreshortening on the face to show the slight angle it has, particularly in the eyes, and a little in the nose. I really like the color in the background.

thank you all so much! annakat: the hair is actually sort of incomplete so ya and i was using a reference picture thats to the side and it was in black and white so the shadows arent very visible