New chapter for a stroy

This is for anyone that likes to read it's a simple concept that I have.1 I call it a concept because as of now it is only two chapters. Although I do plan on adding onto it.

If you can't spell, where's the fun in reading it? I'd rather read a generic, but proper spelling and grammar'd story, then some kid's story that lacks substance because its a jumbled mess.

OK on first impressions I may seem like I can't spell but I just have problems with typos. I can assure you as told by many of my readers that my grammar while in chats or things like this is a bit jumbled but that's only because of my brain it thinks too fast and I get ahead of myself. But I can assure you that I have proofread and edited to make sure the major mistakes were taken out now there may be a misplaced comma or a run on but that is it