untitled. my story doesnt have a name yet

I am going to write part of my story im working on as of now and id like opinions, advice and suggestions on enemies and awesome areas that you Think i should use. The setting of this is the Crimson Forest. A forest thay was permanently stained red with blood from all of the war and the human sacrifices througb the years. There is so much blood there that in some places there are still some puddles of blood left over. "Caelum wake up! Soldiers of Aerophis are coming! Get up!"Alyssia yells waking me from my slumber "Wai-what? Why are they coming through here? They usually avoid the forest." I say while getting u. And ready to leave. "How am i supposed to know that? Maybe they found something worth going after. Or maybe they're a welcoming party. But what i do know is that we should move before they get anywhere near us." she states. "Great! Alyssia did you forget that they always send a group of scouts ahead of them? They could be here right now." I say this and i Hear splashing of blood that wasn't able to sink into the ground. 'Well good luck trying to get away now' i think to myself. "HaLt! Speak thine business in the for being in this forest!" Says the soldier in the front of the group. "What is the matter soldiers? Is there a problem?" i ask while nonchalantly placing my hand on Honor (my katana given to me by my brother) What problem we have does not concern you,knave! Or perhaps it does." Says the soldier with a raised eyebrow and draws his sword. "Where's your angel? Do you not have one? Demon spawn!" He yells What of you? Or do none of you have your angel Or demon?" i ask with a shrug. "Are you taunting them Cae? Thats not wise, you shouldn't do that. Though im ready whenever you are." she says while putting a hand on her twinblade. Ok thats all ill type for now. So tell me Whacha think and ill type more if i get enough people to like it.