Critique #3

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/iM8TbUM.jpg?1[/IMG] [OC- Marx Tristan and his trusty sidekick Dengu!] Had done this a while back and wanted to see how it holds up now compared to some of my recent stuff.

The head looks like it is a little low compared to the shoulders. Like he has no neck. Or maybe it's just the part of the jacket that sticks up behind his head (sorry, can't remember what that's called in english) that does that. But that's the risk of traditional art compared to digital art, it's harder to simply move an object (like the head) when the drawing is completed, and usually one can't see the problem until that phase of the drawing xD but traditional art does have a kind of charm to it that digital art lacks. All in all i really like it, especially Dengu xD

The head looks like it is a little low compared to the shoulders. Like he has no neck. Or maybe it's just the part of the jacket that sticks up behind his head (sorry, can't remember what that's called in english) that does that. But that's the risk of traditional art compared to digital art, it's harder to simply move an object (like the head) when the drawing is completed, and usually one can't see the problem until that phase of the drawing xD but traditional art does have a kind of charm to it that digital art lacks. All in all i really like it, especially Dengu xD

The head looks like it is a little low compared to the shoulders. Like he has no neck. Or maybe it's just the part of the jacket that sticks up behind his head (sorry, can't remember what that's called in english) that does that. But that's the risk of traditional art compared to digital art, it's harder to simply move an object (like the head) when the drawing is completed, and usually one can't see the problem until that phase of the drawing xD but traditional art does have a kind of charm to it that digital art lacks. All in all i really like it, especially Dengu xD