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A sort poem : The unbreakable wall.

sapphireyes
Here we are as we stand side by side like a wall. You can try what you will, but just know we won't fall! You can't break us! So don't even try, you won't take us down! And here's the reason why. We are better then all the hateful words. Together we believe in light in this dark world. so if you're a dreamer come join me, I can turn your dream into a reality. We can find understand where none use to be. We can raise out of this darkness just open your eyes and see!!! They can't break us down if we don't give them a chance, they can't take us down if we stand hand to hand. If we believe in what we know can be, then this world can wake up and become.....That reality.
moose_of_mibu
I like how you worded this prose. If one wrote a poem about a metaphorical "wall", majority of the time, that means inner turmoil that builds up, shutting out themselves from the rest of the world. (It's pretty depressing.)Your take on personal "walls", was rather refreshing. A lot cheerier than I expected. Well done!
moose_of_mibu
Your welcome. :) Fancy profile pic btw, do I sense JTHM inspired work there?
sapphireyes
haha maybe a little I do love those books. It's my own design been drawing for years.
moose_of_mibu
Me too, most of my life. I own the Director's cut; the entire JTHM collection. Now all I need is Squee! and I'll be complete. Johnen Vasquez is my #1 favorite American artist or all time, actually.
sapphireyes
Lol squee I love squee.
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