I bet you entered here thinking this was going to be a "Yu bashing" thread! Nope far from it. I saw the thread Yu posted which will end up right under this one (currently) called "A boy's fear" I didn't really read it since I haven't been up very long and did not get much sleep last night but it seemed he put a lot of work into it and if you care to I think it would deserve some of your notice. It already has the praise of ema_hinata which is good enough for me ;) anyway I blame Yu for posting that and putting such effort into that for making me feel like I should try posting this and see if anybody reads it lol.
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Darkness We all have darkness we try to hideDarkness that’s hidden deep down insideWe do our best to hide from one anotherWe do our best to try and smotherBut it gets free, it never staysIt spreads to others to our dismayBut in the end light will fight dark’s mightAnd we will see who wins this morrow’s night
I read it animekid and it was pretty good. You know this is actually reminding me of the whole persona thing in persona 4 lol not sure if that was intentional or not. Still good little short about the inner workings of the sides of us we like to hide.
Yu- I didn't post anything more yesterday since I figured I would wait until the notifications were back up but it seems there are more posts anyway so I thought, why not? At the time, no it wasn't intentional haha, I've heard a little about the games and they seemed interesting but I never played them although now that you mention it, from the little that I know about them I can see the correlation ^ ^. Yeah I could go back and rework it but to do my best I would probably have to find something to be really unhappy about haha. I seem to do my best stuff when I'm in a dark place.
Maverick-Nooooot really sure what that's supposed to imply but whatever ;)
Life shares its dark moments with one and with all Death comes for one then comes for all Sadness and despair rule one and rule all And pain comes to surface in the cold-hearted thrawl
Day in and day out for some its the same The poor the wounded the hurt and the lame But do not look upon them with disgust and distain For you could as easily be the one with no name
But nay disbelieve that lifes only here to take what is sweet, lovly, and dear Fight through see through that darkness and fearEven when it says you are nothing one would hold dearFor wickedness must lie to hold itself high lest it suucum to less than its prideLife shares its dark moments with one and with allBut thats not all that life has in stallWe gather those dark moments and start anewIn which we all bid those dark moments adieu
I forgot I had this one. I guess I never gave it a title either.
Ashes to ashes ad dust to dust We live as we die We die as we must
There are those that say It is the price we must pay For the lives that we live Throughout each of our days Though it's a price that we payIt's not theirs to sayThat it's a fair price to payFor each of our waysAshes to ashes and dust to dustWe live as we dieWe di as we mustIf that is the priceThat we all must payThen I will live out my lifeTo the fullest each day
I did post it awhile back in the "Last one" thread well the first part 3 lines of it was what I posted. I actually wrote this poem because I wanted to write one that focused around the lines I came up with
Ashes to ashes and dust to dust We live as we die We die as we must
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Darkness
We all have darkness we try to hideDarkness that’s hidden deep down insideWe do our best to hide from one anotherWe do our best to try and smotherBut it gets free, it never staysIt spreads to others to our dismayBut in the end light will fight dark’s mightAnd we will see who wins this morrow’s night
Maverick-Nooooot really sure what that's supposed to imply but whatever ;)
Death comes for one then comes for all
Sadness and despair rule one and rule all
And pain comes to surface in the cold-hearted thrawl
Day in and day out for some its the same
The poor the wounded the hurt and the lame
But do not look upon them with disgust and distain
For you could as easily be the one with no name
But nay disbelieve that lifes only here to take what is sweet, lovly, and dear
Fight through see through that darkness and fearEven when it says you are nothing one would hold dearFor wickedness must lie to hold itself high lest it suucum to less than its prideLife shares its dark moments with one and with allBut thats not all that life has in stallWe gather those dark moments and start anewIn which we all bid those dark moments adieu
I really do appreciate hearing that.
Ashes to ashes ad dust to dust
We live as we die
We die as we must
There are those that say
It is the price we must pay
For the lives that we live
Throughout each of our days
Though it's a price that we payIt's not theirs to sayThat it's a fair price to payFor each of our waysAshes to ashes and dust to dustWe live as we dieWe di as we mustIf that is the priceThat we all must payThen I will live out my lifeTo the fullest each day
Ashes to ashes and dust to dust
We live as we die
We die as we must
and that's how this poem was created.