I would for someone to read my poem & tell me if i need work on it

The air feeled with agony and sorrow. The Sky started to rain tears of sadness The expression on my face turn to anger and frustration she lyed there helplessly in pain and agony She grab my hand and told me she loved me one last time The tears poured down my face like an overflowing river I cried angrily and shouted please don't leave me I watched her beautful blue eyes slowly close beautifully Till this day i yet to express my love to someone else She was the ideal of love She was my everything, yet i watched her die peacefully.

Another Sleepless night Another nightmare that disrupts my dreams Another reminder of what i had lost that day Another day i walk this earth and realize the agony and pain that i have to endure each day Another reminder of her face and how beautiful she looked everyday Another reminder of all the good times we shared Another reason why she was the most precious piece to my puzzle, but now that she gone i wonder will i ever find Another just like her