blazingbow1

ahhh, okay I see, lots of people point this out to me. there is lots of character development, especially for Ken since he is different from everyone else on Earth and Terra.

ah I see, can you give me other examples of popular POV? 1a. On Terra it is the Age of Swords and Magic, but it would be an advanced place without any technology. While Earth it is the present, but with a little futuristic twist. And yes I am having problems presenting it, but once I'm passed that stage I'm golden lol

5a. give me an example of thirdstory viewpoint used in a manga, since I dont really pay attention too much to it and just read. But I know that It first begins with Ken and how his life is dull, then shifts over to Terra I hope this helps, and dont worry if you thought you were being harsh, I welcome anyones opinions whether they are Good or Bad, because it helps me fix some errors I have and motivates me even more. I have shared this Manga Idea with users on this site and they like it, just you and someone else gave me a critics review lol. Thanks man

Arcanedeus Reficul Natas = Lucifer Satan

4a. Hell is Evil, here is the lore behind the first war: The first War between Heaven and Hell started with The Angelian named Arcanedeus Reficul Natas. Angelians are a race of humans that have wings and elvenlike features which live in Utopia, The Kingdom in the Heavens. As a Member of the Utopian High Council, Arcanedeus refused to follow Angelian beliefs in serving the Divines and the fact that he looked down on other races believing that Angelians were Gods among the other inferior races. Therefore the High Council banished Arcanedeus. Falling to Terra, he swore revenge on Utopia. Eventually he made his way into the Order of Holy Knights and Befriended the Knight Valor. He hid his wings before he joined and blended in. He was searching for the evil sword Chaosbringer (combined word sounds awesome) in order to obtain power. When he finally found the Sword, it let out all the evil in him and his appearance changed as he sprouted Horns from his head, his body grew in size, his eyes went Black and pupils turned White. When the Order discovered what he did, they searched and was nowhere to be found, and Arcanedeus attacked Utopia and destroyed it, so Utopia fell from Heavens. Arcanedeus formed the Dark Order and the Remains of Utopia became Hell itself. Arcanedeus led a campaign to conquer all of Terra but was met by the Holy Order, and War between heaven and Hell had begun. Also when I was creating the villian Arcanedeus, I based him off the Devil, as both have a similar background, after all the Devil was once a Angel. His middle and last name are both the Devil's name backwards.

nah man I welcome your honest insight, thats why I asked for your opinion. yea I know "boy with destiny because of his ancestor and now he has to save the world" is getting kinda old, but I thought up of this story during my freshman years in high school, which was about 6 years ago, and that genre hasnt been explored as much back then, and now you have all this stuff about people with destiny. to answer your questions 1a. Yes there is a Heroine, which is the Character's love Interest 2a. Valor left Terra, because at the end of his fight, he pretty much became a god and there was nothing left for him on Terra anymore, but has given what remains of the Order the knowledge to rebuild and how to keep the Magic Seal on Arcanedeus's prison secure without Valor being there. 3a. When the Dark Order is organizing it's forces, they are aware that the Holy Order has the means of keeping Arcanedeus sealed away. But the Holy Order has an Alternative plan in case they fail in keeping the seal on Arcanedeus secure, that they go find the recent descendant of Valor on Earth and send Zadklas (A member of the Order, and a descendant of one of the original Heroes who helped Valor defeat Arcanedeus) to earth to find Ken, and the Dark becomes aware of this and send a few of their members after Zadklas and to also find and Valor's descendant.