My story for my 1st Manga

I was actually talking to a writer the other day, a published one, and he gave me a really good tip. If you're going to do a story outside of our own universe develop the world so deeply and so intricately that it is it's own world. Basically have a bible of information for the world, and only put some of the information in your stories.

Yea that's a really good tip, thanks for sharing the information. Are you planning on doing a Manga? Also as part of the lore, the main antagonist is Arcanedeus Reficul Natas, which the last two parts of his name is the devil's own name backwards and that he is an Angelian (A race of divine humans that have wings) that once lived in Utopia (a continent in the Heavens). So I based his backstory on the fall of Lucifer. what are your thoughts?

Would ken have special powers if he is from Terra? also is this heaven and hell only the heaven and hell of Terra? So does that mean each demesion has its own heaven and hell? Just things to think about! its hard making a great story. I recently told my friend about a story i was pondering about and she found so many holes that i was really greatful that she asked me so many questions to think about.

<i>I was actually talking to a writer the other day, a published one, and he gave me a really good tip. If you're going to do a story outside of our own universe develop the world so deeply and so intricately that it is it's own world. Basically have a bible of information for the world, and only put some of the information in your stories.</i><br><br> This exactly. If you're going to build a world, <i>build</i> it. Make everything internally consistent. Speaking generally, if in your world: Event A led to Event B, and B led to C, but B doesn't actually show up in your story... you should still figure out what B is, so that the relationship between A and C makes sense.<br><br> You may never use any of these details, but the fact that they're there will enrich your world, give you plot and dialogue and narrative ideas, and tie everything together in a way that helps avoid blatant consistency errors.