About Aschthebloody

yea he creep-ed on me earlier this week.he's just off or something...it was really uncomforable and inappropriate. it could have been worse to be honest but still not cool at all. everyone else i've met though has been really chill and not creepy.

Its's good. Though, it seems you are more concerned with wording than information placement. It might benefit to take the current info, simplify it, and use that as the overview. Lay out the remaining sections, then employ creativity in post editing.