Critique #1

Aka-san @redhawk
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Critique #1
Aka-san @redhawk
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/tN3SCVe.jpg?1[/IMG]
[OC - Dark Akuma]
Did this a while back, your input is valuable

neoheart @neoheart
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neoheart @neoheart
I think it's really awesome, you should try making your shading in the boots smother and some and add some white marks to make it look like shine.

Aka-san @redhawk
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Aka-san @redhawk
yea I agree man, thanks. However I'm not good at adding the shine haha.

Elizan @elizan
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Elizan @elizan
I think that this is awesome! The only thing is I don't think the eyes are scary enough...if scary is what you're going for.

Aka-san @redhawk
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Aka-san @redhawk
he's a f'd up character, with almost but distant traits from Deadpool, he looks innocent but he's a devil haha. He's a major Antagonist for the story he's in.
also thanks

aiisholuv @aiisholuv
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aiisholuv @aiisholuv
I would love to see more

Aka-san @redhawk
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Aka-san @redhawk
thanks I do have another one under Critique #2

Kuski @tadaningen
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Kuski @tadaningen
hmm I think you should do more just one shade, like go pitch black somewhere go light grey on some other areas, also you should pay attention on your contouring, more contour on the main character and less on the background that way its a bit more ...you know a bit completed

Aka-san @redhawk
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Aka-san @redhawk
Late reply but thanks
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